This is such a great tool!!
I think that this journal can really help people improve their written skills, so that's my first story, i hope to reiceive some useful corrections.
I will start introducing myself, i'm Federico a 25 years old boy, i live in Milan a big city in the northen part of Italy. At the momenti i'm finishing my studies in Marine Biology, and in in July i'll get my bachelor, Meanwhile i'm working in a garden center during the weekends. I was very lucky to find that job because my mansions over there are to care about the animals we sell and for me in particular is to look after the aquariums.
Despite my age, i had a very long relationship with a girl (7 years and a half) but growing up, we found to be very different, so we decided to split.
I'm a very passionate traveler, so after my bachelor i planned to go in Australia with a working holiday visa. Even if i know that i will only find very humble works i can't wait to face this new thrilling experience.
Once i'll get there i'd like to explore as much as i can, in particular i'm very fascinated by nature and scuba dive into the great barrier reef will be the main point of my journey!
so that's my very first page of my journal, i'll try to keep it updated as much as i can!
Cheers
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Thank you very much Stephanie, I will try to remember your tip :-)
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Hi Federico,
First tip: always capitalize the pronoun "I", even if it's in the middle of a phrase. Hope it helps.
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