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Valentine's Day Every year in our school is organized the Valntine's Ball. As a president of school council I had to mount this ball. In my opinion every opportunity to celebrate is good, so we can't miss as special event as Valentine's Day. The arrangements had started a month before the Valentine's Day. I booked a hall situated close to our school, found a DJ, who was able to handle music and bought some decorations. I farmed printing posters and tickets out to my frinds of council. If i hadn't done it, I would have never made it. Last week before that event we were selling tickets. The amount of people who want to participate in the ball surprised us. All tickets sold out in a few days and a printr told us he wouldn't get more tickets into print, so we've done it ourselves. We had known that those tickets would be smaller, but a drowing man will clutch at a straw and we hoped students woulndn't notice. They wouldn't. To decrease costs of tickets we abandoned buying food. Instead of that we asked pupils for baking cakes. Maybe it's rude to ask guest for preparing food, but they agreed. Directly before the Valentine's Day I was a bit stressed but it was unnecessery. The ball started at 6.00 p.m. and lasted five hours. All record-breaking 300 students and teachers wore long dresses or suits (depends on gender, of course :) ). We were dancing and singing all evening. Because of the Valentine's Day everywere were red balloons in the shape of heart. I had so much fun and I hope our next event will be even more exciting.

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Valentine's Day

Every year in our school is organized the Valentine Ball. As president of school council I had to mount this ball. In my opinion every opportunity to celebrate is good, so we can't miss as special an event as Valentine's Day.

The arrangements had started a month before Valentine's Day. I booked a hall situated close to our school, found a DJ who was able to handle music and bought some decorations. I farmed printing posters and tickets out to my council friends. If I hadn't done that, we would have never made it.

Last week before that event we were selling tickets. The amount of people who wanted to go to the ball surprised us. All tickets sold out in a few days and a printer told us he couldn't print any more, so we did it ourselves. We had known that those tickets would be smaller, but a drowning man will clutch at a straw and we hoped students wouldn't notice.

They didn't.

To decrease ticket costs we abandoned buying food. Instead of that we asked pupils to bake cakes. Maybe it's rude to ask the guests to prepare food, but they agreed.

Directly before Valentine's Day I was a bit stressed but it was unnecessary. The ball started at 6.00 p.m. and lasted five hours. All record-breaking 300 students and teachers wore long dresses or suits (depending on gender, of course :) ). We were dancing and singing all evening. Because of Valentine's Day, everywhere were red balloons in the shape of a heart.

I had so much fun and I hope our next event will be even more exciting.

Very well written!

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