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Good morning Good moring,China.Good morning, everyone. Do you sleep sweet? Had a beautiful dream? Nomatter what yesterday is, please begin the new day. Cherish the time，from now on.

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Good morning

Good moring, China. Good morning, everyone.
Do you sleep sweet sound/well/OK/alright/nicely?
Have beautiful dreams?
No matter what yesterday was,
please begin the new day.
Cherish the time from now on.
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Good morning

Good morning, China.Good morning, everyone.
Did you sleep soundly sleep sweet?
Had a beautiful dream?
No matter what happened yesterday is,
please begin the new day.
Cherish the time from now on.

Hi Veraverawu, 

Thank you for this heartwarming message to start my Sunday. I slept well and I hope you did too. 

Just a few suggestions:

1. It sounds odd in English to describe a "sweet sleep", although we can "sleep soundly" or have "sweet dreams". This is just how some English words collocate.

2. You are writing about your sleep, which is over. You are now awake. The reader who is reading your entry is also awake. Therefore, I changed "Do" to "Did" for you.


Cheers, Have a nice day.

Lance

  

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