LONG TIME AGO
LONG TIME AGO SINCE I WROTE IN ITALKI. I DON´T KNOW IF I´VE PROGRES TOO MUCH SINCE THAT. HOWEVER I´M TOTALLY SURE THAT ENGLISH IS MY FAVOURITE HOBBY.
AFTER THIS INTENTION DECLARATION, I WOULD LIKE TO TELL YOU ABOUT GLORIA FUERTES, A SPANISH POET. SHE WAS BORN IN MADRID, IN CONCRETE AT LAVAPIES, IN 1917. HER FHATER WAS DOORMAN AND HER MOTHER WAS DRESSMAKER. GLORIA HAD A DIFFICULT LIFE BECAUSE WHEN SHE WAS 19 THE CIVIL WAR BROKE OUT BUT THIS DIDN´T STOP THAT SHE WAS GETTING EDUCATION AND SHE GOT A TYPEWRITER TITULE.
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A LONG TIME AGO
IT HAS BEEN A LONG TIME AGO SINCE I WROTE IN ITALKI. I DON´T KNOW IF I´VE PROGRESSED TOO MUCH SINCE THAT THEN. HOWEVER, I´M TOTALLY ('Totally' sounds very childish here) SURE THAT ENGLISH IS MY FAVOURITE HOBBY.AFTER THIS INTENTION DECLARATION, (Sounds unnatural, sentence is fine without it) I WOULD LIKE TO TELL YOU ABOUT GLORIA FUERTES, A SPANISH POET. SHE WAS BORN IN LAVAPIES, MADRID IN CONCRETE(I'm not sure of your meaning 'in concrete') AT LAVAPIES, IN 1917. HER FATHER WAS A DOORMAN AND HER MOTHER WAS A DRESSMAKER. GLORIA HAD A DIFFICULT LIFE BECAUSE A CIVIL WAR BROKE OUT WHEN SHE WAS 19. BUT HOWEVER, THIS DIDN´T STOP THAT SHE WAS HER FROM GETTING AN EDUCATION AND SHE GOT GETTING A TYPEWRITER TITULE.
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