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It was the 2006 , Italy had won the world football cup. In that moment after all my thoughts were fighting each other in my mind i realize that nothing is possibile. But in the same time was to understand what was possibile in the world's limits. Didn't 't have realized yet how to transform bad things and good things in a productive way which would have permitted me to reach my American Dream. And the life, as every time, gave me a new big amazing problem, an inconvenient with which i have lived until now. The chance that in whatever i moment i could die.
Tyler Durden told " We can't have fear of the death all the life....We must have awareness that i day we will die.....maybe one year....maybe tomorrow.."
Now my questions is....becoming a rich leader....or to live every day like the last?
Where you don't attach importance at everything and you fuck everything.
Which is the difference between good things and bad things? What about the survival?
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Could you correct this text please?
It was the 2006 , Italy had won the world football cup. In that moment after all my thoughts were fighting each other, in my mind i I realized that nothing is possibile. But in at the same time I was to understand what was possibile in the world's limits. I didn't 't have yet realized yet how to transform bad things and good things in a productive way which would have permitted me to reach my American Dream. And the life, as every time, gave me a new big amazing problem, an inconveniencet with which i have lived until now. The chance that in whatever i moment i could die.Tyler Durden told said " We can't have fear of the death all the life....We must have awareness that one day we will die.....maybe one year....maybe tomorrow.."
Now my questions is....becoming a rich leader....or to live every day like the last?
Where you don't attach importance at to everything and you fuck everything.
Which is the difference between good things and bad things? What about the survival?
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