Big changes you’ve made in your life and the tipping points for making them

Of course I can remember several important events throughout my life that they certainly changed it (The reader already knows you are speaking about your life so you do not have to say it again).

Beginning with the day that I vanished from my parent’s home and moved in with my girlfriend when I was only 22 years old. The tipping point, in this event, was that I achieved my first job a few months beforehand.

Another important event that completely changed my life was when I had my daughter. She brought my home incredible joy and happiness. Because I had my daughter when I was only 28 yeas old, it is so difficult for me to explain what the tipping point was that changed our minds (because we both only thought of travelling and enjoying our married life) (I think this is what you're trying to express, forgive me if I changed the sentence too much) But you never know and the birth of my daughter was the happiest event in my life.

Ana: I made a few corrections. I tried to keep in as many of your words as possible. This was a wonderful entry and a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing!

Big changes you’ve made in your life and the tipping points for making them

Of course I can remember several important events throughout my life which certainly changed it.

Beginning with the day I vanished from my parent’s home to elope with my girlfriend when I was only 22 years old. The tipping point, in this event, was that I had gotten a job a few months before.

Another important change that changed completely my life was when I had my daughter. She brought to my home an incredible joy and happiness. Because I had my daughter at 28 years old it is hard for me to explain which, exactly, was the tipping point that had changed my mind (because we both only think about travelling and enjoying our married lives). But, you never know and the birth of my daughter was the most happy event in my life.

Thank you in advance for your review. It's so useful for me. 'tipping point' is not quite clear. Do you mean an event or reason which decides you to do something; eg., the reason I brought my umbrella was the rain? Or, the tipping point of bringing my umbrella was the rain?

Very well written!

Big changes you’ve made in your life and the tipping points for making them.

Of course I can remember several important events throughout my life that have certainly changed my life.

Beginning with the day I vanished from my parent’s home to live with my girlfriend when I was only 22 years old. The tipping point, in this event, was achieving my first job a few months beforehand.        (Using the word vanished here, it sounds like you ran away from home or were taken from your home. I would say I left my parent's home.)

Another important event that completely changed my life was when I had my daughter. It has brought to my home an incredible joy and happiness. Because I had my daughter when I was only had 28 years old it is so difficult for me to explain which was the tipping point that brought on that decision (I think you are trying to say?) gone to change my mind (because we were both only focussed on travelling and enjoying our married lives). But, you never know and the birth of my daughter was the most happy event of my life.

Thank you in advance for your review. It's so useful for me.

A really lovely piece of writing. Well done!