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my weekend plan
Today is friday and Tomorrow is the weekend.I'm so happy that I can have a rest after a busy week work.I have(/made) a plan for my weekend.I always sleep in on weekends.I'll do the same tomorrow!
And then,I will go to the grocery to buy Tangyuan.This is a traditional chinese food made from glutinous rice flour.They are traditionally eaten during Yuanxiao or the Lantern Festival in our country.It's very sweet.
After eating my breakfast,I will go to the hospital to visit my father-in-low.He's been in hospital for weeks.I hope he will be himself soon.
It's getting later.It's time to go to bed.Being a night owl is not good for health.
Wish all of you guys could have a nice weekend,and Happy Lantern Festival!
Good night!
Hello! Here are my corrections! I hope you find it useful. Please, let me know if you have any questions.
I always sleep in on weekends. So, I'll do the same tomorrow!
And then, I will go to the grocery to buy Tangyuan. This is a traditional Chinese food made from glutinous rice flour. They are traditionally eaten during Yuanxiao or the Lantern Festival in our country. It's very sweet.
After eating my breakfast, I will go to the hospital to visit my father-in-law. He's been in the hospital for weeks. I hope he will be himself soon. (Did you mean, I hope he will be better soon?)
It's getting late. It's time to go to bed. Being a night owl is not good for your health.
I wish all a nice weekend, and a Happy Lantern Festival!
Good night!
My weekend plans.
Today is friday so tomorrow is the weekend. I'm so happy that I can have a rest after a busy week at work. I make a plan made plans for my weekend.I always sleep in on the weekends.So does I'll sleep in tomorrow!
And t Then, I will go to the grocery store to buy Tangyuan. This is a traditional chinese food meal made form glutinous rice flour.They are It is traditionally eaten during Yuanxiao or the Lantern Festival in our country. It's very sweet.
After eating my breakfast, I will go to the hospital to visit my father-in-law. He's been in the hospital for weeks. I hope he will be himself soon.
It's getting late. It's time to go to bed.Being a night owl is not good for your health.
Wishing all of you guys could have a nice weekend, and Happy the Lantern Festival!
Good night! Hi Lily :) I hope I haven't changed the meaning of what you are trying to say here. Just remember to place a space after you place a period at the end of a sentence.
My weekend plan:
Today is friday and tomorrow is the weekend. I'm so happy that I can have a rest after a busy week at work. I will make a plan for my weekend.I always sleep in on weekends, so I will tomorrow, too!
And then, I will go to the grocery store to buy Tangyuan. This is a traditional Chinese food made form glutinous rice flour. They are It is traditionally eaten during Yuanxiao or the Lantern Festival in our country. It's very sweet.
After eating my breakfast, I will go to the hospital to visit my father-in-law. He's been in hospital for weeks. I hope he will be himself get better soon.
It's getting late. It's time to go to bed. Being a night owl is not good for your health.
Wishing all of you guys could have a nice weekend and a Happy Lantern Festival!
Good night!
Great story Lily. I've made some corrections for you! enjoy :)
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