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First notebook entry :introducing myself Hi. My name is Takuro. I study English in my technical school. And I want to enter university.

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First notebook entry :introducing myself

Hi. My name is Takuro. I study English in my technical school. And I want to enter university.
Hi, my name is Takuro. I study english at my technical school, and I want to enter university.  

You shouldn't start a sentence with a conjuncton (e.g but, and, because), it is grammatically incorrect.

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