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Today is today
Today is thursday and I am very tired on my bed (is near to almost midnight) after a nice day. In the morning I go went to the village market with my mom and we buy bought natural food for a lot of money. At the lunch we eat ate fish with potatoes with my fathers on the little house. In the evening i go went to the tennis public court public tennis court of my city to play with my friends. Im dissapointed I was disappointed because I lose lost the final game but waas happy for the opportunity to enjoy this magic magical sport.Now im rest resting and really with and I have foot pain for a after a hard day in my life.
The majority of the mistakes were because you didn't used the past tense.
La mayoria de los errores fueron por no usar las los verbos en pasado.
Today is today
Today is thursday and I very tired on my bed (is near to midnight) after a nice day. In the morning I go to the village market with my mom and we buy natural food for a lot of money. At the lunch we eat fish with potatoes with my fathers on the little house. In the evening i go to the tennis public court of my city to play with my friends. Im dissapointed because I lose the final game but happy for the opportunity to enjoy this magic sport.Now im rest and really with foot pain for a hard day in my life.
Today is Thursday and I am very tired on my bed after a nice day. It is near to midnight right now. In the morning, I went to the village market with my mom and we bought natural foods for a lot of money. At lunch, we ate fish with potatoes. We had lunch with my father in our little house. In the evening, I went to the tennis public court in my city to play with my friends. I'm disappointed because I lost the final game, but happy for the opportunity to enjoy this magical sport. Now I'm resting with a lot of pain in my foot after a hard day in my life.
Today is Thursday
Today is Thursday and I'm very tired (it is close to midnight). I am lying on my bed after a nice day. In the morning, I went to the village market with my mom. We bought fresh food (or do you mean organic food?) and spent a lot of money. At lunch, we ate fish with potatoes with my father at the little house. (The meaning of "at the little house" is not clear). In the evening, I went to the city's public tennis court to play tennis with my friends. I'm disappointed because I lost the final game, but happy for the opportunity to enjoy this magical sport.Now, I'm having foot pain and resting after a hard day.
Please pay attention to tenses! I or I'm should always be capitalized.
Today is Thursday
Today is Thursday and right now I am very tired lying on my bed (it is close to midnight) after a nice day. In the morning I went to the village market with my mom and we bought natural food for a lot of money. For lunch we ate fish with potatoes at my father's little house. In the evening I went to the public tennis court in my city to play tennis with my friends. I'm disappointed because I lost the final game but happy for the opportunity to enjoy this amazing sport.Now I am resting with some foot pain because of this busy day in my life.
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