Please correct my English writing "Who Are You?"
Who are you? The answer can be: I am the second daughter of John, I am the teacher of Lino College, I am …. But to me, the best answer is: I am a useful person to the society. To be useful to the society means you produce more than you consume. In natural world, there are consumers, as most animals are, and producers, like most plants are. In human society, it is the same. Some people are lazy and unfriendly. They live on the fruit from other people’s work, they complain all the time, or even do crimes. They are the consumers of the human society. On the other hand, some people are hard workers. They do their best to serve people, to help the companies they work for, to protect their families and their communities. They are the producers. Producers are normally welcome by most. As time goes by, they become the leaders of their groups, the supporters of their societies, the paragons of their industries. How to be a producer? To me the way is by learning new skills and knowledge to strengthen my talent, keeping focusing on my ability, and using it to do something for the society. To be a producer doesn’t mean you have to be perfect and know everything, but you must have the passion and ability to make yourself useful. For example, I might not good at writing, but I am pretty fast with numbers. By learning some relevant knowledge I may do some number related work to support my life and to return to the country. Of course, this process is not easy. You have to overcome many difficulties, such as problems of language and cultural difference. But I understand I should never give up. Because to make yourself useful to people and society is the only way to benefit both the country and your life. So take every minute to learn and practice and then make some people live better or happier because of your existence.
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