A start
It is the first time for me to join this wonderful community.And now I want to use a short sentence to narrtive how could I find this Web.Actually,I took a glance at my WeiBo just now,and a headline attracked me,which the topic was 'how to learn a new language successful'.In a word,the reason for me to come here is improve my English speaking.Of course,I long to make some friends as well.Let' talking and enjoying!
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A start
It is the first time for me to join this wonderful community.*1 And now I want to write a little to tell youabout how I found this Website. Actually, I took a glance at my WeiBo just now and a headline caught my attention,*2 which the topic was 'how to learn a new language successfully'. In a word, the reason for me to come here is improve my English speaking*3. Of course, I long to make some friends as well. Let's talk.Good work ^_^ 加油！
我在这儿是英语老师哦，需要帮忙找我。
please see below for more advice ^_^
*1 After a full stop or a comma you must always include a space.
'This is my first time in this community' would sound a bit more natural.
*2 caught my attention sounds more natural than 'attracted me'
*3 'improve my English' is enough, no need to talk about 'oral English' or 'English speaking' in general conversation. When dealing with a teacher you can talk more about which are you are looking to improve.
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