[Picture four] Could you please correct my sentences? If you were me how would you describe this phot? I hope that my descriptions of the photo give you a good idea of what they look like. [picture

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Hiro Miyamoto 🚄Professional Teacher

[Picture four] Could you please correct my sentences? If you were me how would you describe this phot? I hope that my descriptions of the photo give you a good idea of what they look like. [picture four] This is a picture of a couple on nice place of somewhere.the location seems like at park or on the bridge in NY city. I see the river and forest trees and a tall twins building behind the couple.the building is left side of the phot. The whether is couldbe cloudy. The couple is kissing and closing their eyes. The couple wears black clothes. A woman is Japanese.A man is British. The man doesn't wear glasses on this time. I like and respect both persons ,It's a beautiful phot.

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[Picture four]

Could you please correct my sentences?
If you were me, how would you describe this photo?
I hope that my descriptions of the photo give you a good idea of what they look like.

[picture four]

This is a picture of a couple in a nice
place of somewhere. The location seems to be like in a park or on a bridge in NY city. I see a river, some forest trees, and a tall twin building behind the couple. The building is on the left side of the photo. The weather seems to be cloudy.

The couple is kissing with eyes closed. The couple wears black clothes.
The woman is Japanese. The man is British.
The man doesn't wear glasses during this time (or in the photo).

I like and respect both people. It's a beautiful photo.

[Picture four]

Could you please correct my sentences?
If you were me, how would you describe this photo?
I hope that my descriptions of the photo gives you a good idea of what they look like.

[picture four]

This is a picture of a couple in a nice place of somewhere. The location seems to be a park or on a bridge in NY city. I see a river, trees of a forest and the tall twin towers behind the couple. The building is on the left side of the photo. The weather is cloudy.

The couple is kissing with their and closing their eyes closed. The couple is wearing black clothes.
The woman is Japanese. The man is British.
The man isn't wearing glasses at that time. doesn't wear glasses on this time.

I like and respect both people. It's a beautiful photo.

Hi Hiro,

Do be careful with the usage of determiners.

We use "a" for a general noun, or when we are introducing the noun for the first time.

We use "the" for a specific noun.

Cheers,
Lance

[Picture four]

Could you please correct my sentences?
If you were me how would you describe this phot?
I hope that my descriptions of the photo give you a good idea of what they look like.

[picture four]

This is a picture of a couple who seems to be at a lovely location, such as a park or on a bridge in NY city. I see a river, and a forest full of trees, as well as the twin towers behind the couple to the left. The weather seems cloudy.
The couple closes their eyes while kissing; they are wearing black clothes. The woman is Japaneses and the man is British. The man is not wearing glasses this time.

I like and respect both of them. Its a beautiful photo.

I hope this helps!

Casey

Good job but dont forget about the beginning of the next sentence. You forget to start new sentenses with a capital letter.

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Не могли бы вы исправить мои предложения?
Если вы меня были как бы вы описали этот фот?
Я надеюсь , что мои описания фото даст вам хорошее представление о том, как они выглядят.

[фото четырех]

Это картина пара на хорошем
месте расположения somewhere. The кажется, в парке или на мосту в городе Нью - Йорк. Я вижу реку и лесные деревья и высокий близнецы здание за зданием couple. The остается сторону фот. Ли couldbe облачно.

Пара целуется и закрывают глаза. Пара носит черную одежду.
Женщина Japanese. A человек британец.
Человек не носить очки на это время.

Мне нравится и уважать как лица, Это прекрасный фот.

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