The ticket
This is my friend's story writed > Pls edit if it is wrong about sentences. Thanks for everyone.
''Was cleaning my car this morning in the train parking lot when the two parking officers showed up. One guy then got out of the car, went around then to the front of the car next to mine. He pretended to look at the train, eating an apple and having an amuse time. He did not say anything so I kept cleaning my trunk. They then suddently bust out laughing, I stood up turn looking at them without a clue. When they were gone, I came in the car then I noticed a parking ticket inserted on my windshield. One question stuck in my head: why are they so cowered and disgusting to give me the ticket behind my back and to have such a great time ruining people's day.''
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The ticket
This is my friend's written story. Please edit if sentences are wrong.Thanks, for everyone.''I was cleaning my car this morning in the train parking lot when the two parking officers showed up. One of the guys then got out of the car and went around then to the front of the car next to mine. He pretended to look at the train while eating an apple and enjoying himself. He did not say anything, so I kept cleaning my trunk. Then, they suddenly burst out laughing! I stood up, turned, and looked at them. I had no clue what was happening. When they were gone, I got in the car and I noticed a parking ticket attached my windshield. One question stuck in my head: Why are they so cowardly and nasty, giving me the ticket behind my back and to having such a great time ruining people's day?''
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The ticket
This is the story written by my friend. Pls edit it if it the sentences are wrong. Thanks everyone.''When I was cleaning my car this morning in the train parking lot, when the two parking officers showed up. One of the guys then got out of the car, went around then to the front of the car next to mine. He pretended to look at the train while eating an apple and having an amuse time. He did not say anything so I kept cleaning my trunk. Then they suddenly bursted out laughing, I stood up, turned and looked at them. I didn't know what was happening. When they went away, I came to the car then I noticed a parking ticket inserted on my windshield. One question stuck in my head: Why are they so rude and excessive that they gave me the ticket behind my back and had such a great time ruining people's day?''
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