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Disappointment
Half years ago, I went to UK to learn English(one of my excuses to convince my parents), but the real reason is that it's my dream to study abroad and make friends from different cultures. Anyway,I'm back in Taiwan now but still miss the atmosphere there. As a result, I apply for ''international buddy'' of my university.(Students to help the exchange students adapt Taiwan's lifestyle.) Yesterday I asked the school about my buddy and they told me due to some reasons I don't have the buddy this semester. I was thinking'' Am I not good enough? '' But they didn't tell me the reason why I was not chosen.Kinda disappointed because of this. But I think there's always another way.
Great paragraph! Sorry to hear you didn't get to host an international buddy. :( You are right, there's always another way! Below is another way you could write this:
Half a year ago, I went to the UK to learn English (at least that's the reason I gave my parents!). The real reason I went is that it's my dream to study abroad and make friends from different cultures. Anyway, I'm back in Taiwan now but still miss the atmosphere there. As a result, I applied to host an "international buddy" at my university so I could help exchange students adapt to living in Taiwan. Yesterday I asked the school about my buddy, and they told me that for some reason I don't have a buddy this semester. This made me think, "Am I not good enough?" Unfortunately, they didn't tell me the reason why I wasn't chosen. I feel pretty disappointed about this, but I can always persevere.
Disappointed
Half a years ago, I went to the UK to learn English (one of my excuses to convince my parents), but the real reason is that it's my dream to study abroad and make friends from different cultures. Anyway, I'm back in Taiwan now but still miss the atmosphere there. As a result, I applied for ''international buddy'' of my university. (Students to help the exchange students adapt Taiwan's lifestyle). Yesterday I asked the school about my buddy and they told me due to some reasons I don't have the buddy this semester. I was thinking " Am I not good enough? '' But they didn't tell me the reason why I was not chosen.Kinda disappointed because of this. But I think there's always another way.
You're English is really good!
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