Sickness
At that time I saw my grandpa very sickness, I was very sad because I wanted his very much.
He had sickness very strange and strong no doctor could save him.
before die him his words were: "You have live to every day as if it were the last day"
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Sickness
At that time I saw my grandpa very sick, I was very sad because I loved him very much.He had a very serious strange disease, no doctor was able to save him.
Before he died, his last words were: "You must live every day as if it were the last".
El pésame. Good job :D
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Sickness
At that time I saw my grandpa very sickness, I was very sad because I wanted his very much.He had sickness very strange and strong no doctor could save him.
before die him his words were: "You have live to every day as if it were the last day"
WHEN I saw my grandpa very sick, I was REALLY sad because I LOVED HIM very much. He had A VERY STRANGE, STRONG ILLNESS and no doctor could save him. Before he DIED, his LAST words were: "You have TO live every day as if it were YOUR last."
Some of the corrections I made were only to make your writing sound more natural.
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Sickness
At that time I saw my grandpa very sick, I was very sad because I wanted him very much.He had a very strange and strong sickness that no doctor could save him.
before he died, his words were: "You have to live everyday as if it was the last day"
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Sickness
At that time I saw my grandpa very sick , I was very sad because I wanted him badly .He had very strange and strong sickness , no doctor could save him.
before he died ,his last words were: "You have to live every day as if it is the last day"
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