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about travel I am a Chinese girl. I learned English and Russian. But I haven't been to foreign country. So I want to travel to Russia,England and America. I want go to Korea,although I haven't learned Korean. I think I can speak English if I will go to Korea. There are many beautiful country in China. For exampe Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou ,Nanjing ,Qingdao, Xian ,Chongqing,Shengyang and Harbin. I have been to Beijing ,Shanghai , Shenyang and Jilin.Now I want go to Chongqing and Qingdao,because my favourite sing and film star were there . I think I will go there one day. Oh, I also have been all the Heilongjiang province. I was born and grow in Heilongjiang. I like my country and my hometown. In my hometown,it's very cold in winter and very hot insummer.And in my hometown many people are very hospitable.The Heilongjiang river is in our province . It's a very long and beautiful river . No matter summer or winter many traveller come here . Welcome everybody come to my hometown.

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about travel

I am a Chinese girl. I learned English and Russian. But I haven't been to a foreign country. So I want to travel to Russia,England and America. I want to go to Korea,although I haven't learned Korean. I think I can speak English if I will go to Korea.
There are many beautiful country cities in China. For exampe Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou ,Nanjing ,Qingdao, Xian ,Chongqing,Shengyang and Harbin. I have been to Beijing ,Shanghai , Shenyang and Jilin.Now I want to go to Chongqing and Qingdao,because my favourite singer and film star were born there . I think I will go there one day.
Oh, I also have been all over the Heilongjiang province. I was born and grow in Heilongjiang. I like my country and my hometown. In my hometown,it's very cold in winter and very hot in summer.And in my hometown many people are very hospitable.The Heilongjiang river is in our province . It's a very long and beautiful river . NoIt doesn't matter ifi summer or winter many travellers  come here . Welcome everybody, come to my hometown.


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