The trip plan to London
Good evening my friends. I decided to go London 1week in this summer vacation (Jun) . So I was thinking about where should I stay? Every time when I travel abroad or even in my country trip, l thought that I want to cooking by myself to keep my body condition good and save money. Especially when I stay in abroad,I prefer to spend the time like 'living there' not 'as a guest'. Because it might helps me understand what they feeling or thinking in the country life, and there culture or history. Moreover I want to live western country.
So this time I'm considering about airbnb and condominiums.
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Planning at Trip to London
Good evening my friends. I decided to go London for 1 week during this coming summer vacation (June) . So I was wondering, where should I stay? Every time when I travel abroad or even in my home country, I ideally want to cook meals myself to keep my body healthy and save money. Especially when I travel abroad, I prefer to spend time there like a local, not as a guest. I feel like it might help me understand the way people feel or think in that country and their culture or history. Moreover, I want to live western country.So this time I'm considering about airbnb and condominiums.
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The trip plan to London The Planned Trip to London
Good evening my friends. I decided to go London for 1 week on summer vacation (June) . So I was thinking about where I should should I stay. Every time when I travel abroad or even domestically in my country trip, l thought decided that I wanted to cooking by myself to keep my body condition good healthyand save money. When I stay in abroad, I prefer to spend the time like 'living there' not 'as a guest'. Because it might helps me understand what they are feeling or thinking in their daily country lives, and there their culture and history. Moreover I want to live in a western country.So this time I'm considering about airbnb and condominiums.
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This was constructed well! There was not much to correct, however there were some grammatical and spelling errors that can be easily fixed. Good job!
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Hi Maiko! Nice entry. The mistakes you made weren't too bad. A few spelling and sentence structure errors, that was it. It seems like you've been practicing English for a while! I agree with you about living like a local. I usually use airbnb when I travel and like it so much better than staying in a hotel. Hope you have a good trip!
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