I'm struggling to put my thoughts into English.
Can you please correct my English and make it more natural please? Help me, please.
The most important thing is ''LOVE'' as we are human. And to cherish and grow it as to enhance our inner senses to being shined.
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I'm struggling to put my thoughts into English.
Can you please correct my English and make it more natural please? Help me, please.The most important thing as a human is ''LOVE'' as we are human, and to cherish and grow this love it as to enhance our inner senses to being shined { (such that it shines from within us) or (such that its shine can warm us on the inside).
I wasn't entirely sure what you wanted to say in the last sentence so I wrote the two possibilities that I thought.
There are many ways to write what you wanted to say, but I believe that I kept my corrections similar to how you originally phrased it.
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