My dream
Hi. Today I decided to continue learning English. The main reason of my intenion is my dream: I was in Syria and helped to project new cities and reconstruct old. I was the main engineer because now I study in Architecture-Constructure faculty. The dream looked very exciting and real. I heard people's speach, felt the wind and saw peoples who could survive the war - tremendous disaster. Their faces were serious and they often tried to tell me about their lifes and troubles, they lended their hands and asked to help. BUT I couldn't understand them - they all spoke in English and Arabic. I was scare and surprise. Afterwards my dream ended. It influenced on me so much that now You can see the result: I'm writing this essay))
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My dream
Hi. Today I decided to continue learning English. The main reason for this decision is my dream: I was in Syria and helped to create projects for new cities and reconstruct old ones. I was the main engineer because of my studies in Architecture and Construction. The dream looked very exciting and real. I heard people's speech, felt the wind and saw peoples who could survive the war and tremendous disaster. Their faces were serious and they often tried to tell me about their lives and troubles, they lent their hands and asked to help, BUT I couldn't understand them because they all spoke in English and Arabic. I was scared and surprised. Afterwards, my dream ended. It influenced on me so much that now you can see the result: I'm writing this essay.0
I admire you.You are a brave soldier.I hope you will be a talanted architect. There are some grammar mistakes I hope you will correct them yourself.(speak English without preposition in, to be scared and to be surprised я был удивлён I was surprised, a spelling mistake speech, мн..число life-lives, people-люди, peoples - народы, to build new cities and to rebuild the old ones- the old cities) Good luck!
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