About water ploblem
Now, I'm learning about water problems at school. So I write about how I think to solve that.
I think it is important not to buy too much food. There are so many kinds of foods in developed countries, and you will want to buy them. But you can't eat up all of them and the foods you can't eat up will be throw away. This is waste of "virtual water". So you have to buy food as much as you can eat.
And don't forget we are shering the water as "virtual water ".
The more the number of developed countries increase, the more food will be consumed.
The water we can use is limited, so we have to use it (with?) saving.
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About the water problem
Now, I'm learning about water problems, so I am writing about how to solve them.I think it is important not to buy too much food. There are so many kinds of foods in developed countries, and you will want to buy all of them. But you can't eat all of it, and the foods you can't eat will be thrown away. This is a waste of "virtual water," so you have to buy only as much food as you can eat.
Please explain how "virtual water" is related to the water problem. I don't understand why you're suddenly talking about food because you first start out talking about the water problem.
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About water ploblem
Now, I'm learning about water problems. So I am going to*1 write about how I think we can solve them.I think it is important not to buy too much food. There are so many different kinds of foods available in developed countries, and you will inevitably want to buy them. But you can't eat up all of them and the foods you can't eat up will be throw away. This is waste of "virtual water". So you have to buy food as much as you can eat.*2
Good piece and I like your idea about not buying too much food!
*1 'going to' do something - see this website https://learnenglishkids.britishcouncil.org/en/grammar-practice/going-plans
*2 So you should only buy as much as you can eat.
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