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English Today, it needs spend money in the communications between regions, because it are so much old. The governments should spend more money on the transport more used by the population. The transport more used by the population it depends of the country and of the culture of these population. For example, in Spain, the major part of the population uses a car like vehicle for moving around the country. For this, I think that governments should spend money on roads rather tan railways. In Galicia, for example, the major part of roads between small villages there are very old and there are in poor conditions for driving a car. This makes that there are a lot of accidents in these roads, which are a public danger for the population that lives there. These roads are responsability of the governments and they are who should fix this problem. However, today there are very fast trains that could improve the transport around Spain, and for this is necessary to spend money on railways. So, this could to be a way to change our principal way to travel. For all this, I think that is necessary that Governments makes a plan to find the best way to spend the money in communications. They must to find the way to spend the money for that the major part of the population has a benefit.

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Today, Spain needs to spend money in the communications between regions, because they are so much old. The governments should spend more money on the transportation more used by the population.

The transportation more used by the population it depends on the country and the culture of these population. For example, in Spain, the major part of the population most people uses a car like vehicle for moving around the country. For this, I think that governments should spend money on roads rather than railways.

In Galicia, for example, the major part of roads between small villages there are very old and there are in poor conditions for driving a car. This means that there are a lot of accidents in these roads, which is a public danger for the population that lives there. These roads are the responsibility of the governments and they are the ones who should fix this problem.

However, today there are very fast trains that could improve the transportation around Spain, and for this it is necessary to spend money on railways. So, this could to be a way to change our principal way to travel.

For all this, I think that it is necessary that the Governments makes a plan to find the best way to spend the money in communications. They must to find the way to spend the money to benefit for that the most people major part of the population has a benefit.

On one other note, communication usually means things like telephone, internet, radio/tv. Transportation usually refers to things like roads, buses, trains, and airplanes. I think you meant to use 'transportation' in most of the places that you used communication.

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