昨天在纽约市法拉盛区的春节游行我加入了 - I marched in Flushing, NY Lunar New Year Parade yesterday.
昨天在纽约市法拉盛区的春节游行我加入了。我跟法拉盛区公司的阁一起加入了。公司社长邀请我。有很多美丽的观众。他们是中国和韩国从来的。他们是美国人。
普通话，我说了 “大家好，新年快乐！” 那么观众回答了，“新年快乐！”
我就感觉很好的。
Yesterday, I participated in the Flushing (Queens, NY) Lunar New Year Parade. I participated with the Flushing Chamber of Commerce. The Chamber's executive director invited me. There were many beautiful spectators. They were from China and South Korea. They were American.
In Mandarin, I said, "How is everybody? Happy New Year!" Then they responded, "Happy New Year!"
I felt great!
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昨天我加入了在纽约市法拉盛区的春节游行我加入了 - I marched in Flushing, NY Lunar New Year Parade yesterday.
昨天我加入了在纽约市法拉盛区的春节游行我加入了。我跟法拉盛区公司的阁（not sure how to translate this in Chinese)一起加入了。公司社长邀请了我。有很多美丽的观众（这句话翻译得没错，但是在中文里这样说话很奇怪;) )他们是从中国和韩国来的。他们是美国人。用普通话，我说了 “大家好，新年快乐！” 然后观众回答了，“新年快乐！”
我就感觉很好的
Yesterday, I participated in the Flushing (Queens, NY) Lunar New Year Parade. I participated with the Flushing Chamber of Commerce. The Chamber's executive director invited me. There were many beautiful spectators. They were from China and South Korea. They were American.
In Mandarin, I said, "How is everybody? Happy New Year!" Then they responded, "Happy New Year!"
I felt great!
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昨天我加入了在纽约市法拉盛区的春节游行 。法拉盛区公司的阁也跟我一起加入了。是公司社长邀请的我。有很多美丽的观众。他们是从中国和韩国来的。他们是美国人。
我用普通话说了 “大家好，新年快乐！” , 很多观众就回答：“新年快乐！”
我当时感觉很棒。
Yesterday, I participated in the Flushing (Queens, NY) Lunar New Year Parade. I participated with the Flushing Chamber of Commerce. The Chamber's executive director invited me. There were many beautiful spectators. They were from China and South Korea. They were American.
In Mandarin, I said, "How is everybody? Happy New Year!" Then they responded, "Happy New Year!"
I felt great!
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we usually put verbs behind subjects, so the sentence should be" 昨天我參加了在紐約市法拉盛區的春節遊行" and to be more fluently, you can combine the first and the second sentence together: 昨天我與公司的Chamber(I don't know what it refers to in Chinese)一同參加了在紐約市法拉盛區的春節遊行。The last sentence could be" 感覺真棒"
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