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sentences about a building
I had to write a text English but some of the sentences seems wrong or unnatural to me. Could someone have a look at it? Thanks :)Our work mainly consisted in of a study case and an exchange with the XR architecture firm. We tried to understand and to analyze this complex building to see if it reached its goal of revitalising the district of Laude. It was also in order done to see whether or not a mixed-use building could reach the same goal as a functional mixing district and create a pleasant living environment.
Usually, this functional mixing is made at a district/neighbourhood scale and every building has a very precise function.
Considered as being complicated to develop, mixed functions building are rare. Yet, by having a smart design, buildings could offer a great variety of functions and contribute to having more livable living cities in the same way that mixed districts do.
Through the example of the Block Tower, we are going to demonstrate that mixed-use constructions can reach the objectives of functional mixing district and re-revitalize a district in escheat.
The 1980s marked a new turning point in Rotterdam’s city-planning orientations: a new directive was born, that of modernity and the skyline.
sentences about a building
I had a text to write in English but some of the sentences seems wrong or unnatural to me. Could someone have a look a it. Thanks :)Our work mainly consisted of a study case and an exchange with the XR architecture firm. We tried to understand and to analyze this complex building, to see if it reached its goal of revitalising the district of Laude. It was also in order to see whether or not a mixed-use building could reach the same goal as a functional mixing district and create a pleasant living environment.
Usually, this functional mixing is made at a district/neighbourhood scale and every building has a very precise function.
Considered as being to complicated to develop, mixed functions building are rare. Yet, by having a smart design, buildings could offer a great variety of functions and contribute to having more living cities in the same way that mixed districts do.
Through the example of the Block Tower we are going to demonstrate that mixed-use constructions can reach the objectives of functional mixing district and re-revitalize a district in Escheat.
The 1980s marked a new turning point in Rotterdam’s city-planning orientations: a new directive was born, that of modernity and the skyline.
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