My mother.

So, She didn’t go to work today because she was ill. Thanks to God, she is better right now. A man came to my house asking for $0.25 for to buying a coffee. Some people do that, but they want the money for buying a cigarette or alcohol. You can notice when people are not being honest, but this wasn’t the case. 

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She knew the man really wanted to buy a coffee and some food if he got more money. My mom and I didn’t have some  any  cash! I was so busy and I didn’t pay much attention to himthat, but I heard from my mom say, "I don’t have the cash (coins) right now, Sir. But I can give you a coffee, and some beans, cream and bread. I just thought my mom is an angel! I heard the excited voice of the man as he hadn't wasn’t eaten since yesterday.

I went to take a look at see the man. He has Parkinson's disease. I just thought my mom is a great person! She wasn't isn’t feeling well  and but she was is taking the time to cook for this man. She gave the him breakfast to the man, and he was so happy and thankful.

There is something that my mother always says, always! "I don’t like to give money when I go the church.(and she barely goes there) Many people go to hear the mass, but they don’t practise the word of God. Sometimes they are the worst people (some people, ok).

She is always willing to help others. She has helped me too when I was in trouble.  I’m in troubles, She is my angel. I’m thankful to God because she is my mother.
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Hi Luisa, 

I am touched by your appreciation for your mother. Your mother is indeed your greatest source of wisdom and a role model.

Please send my regards to her. 

Ps Just a suggestion to be mindful of your tenses, as there are parts of your story where events happened before or after your mother recovered. There are some parts where you are writing your reflection

Cheers, Lance

My mother.

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