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Fluid I reunited with a friend whom I met in South Korea here in England. She has been traveling the world for more than a year and her story inspires me a lot. Our background is very different but we had really great time together so I am so happy to have met her in Korea. I was not sure where to go and what to do now but thanks to her, now I know clearly that I want to see other countries as many as I can. I wanted to stay in the UK just because I have visa and I spent lots of effort, money and time for that but it is not worth to stay here just because of it. In 2011, when I went to the Philippines, I was planning to travel around south east Asia after finishing the school but as soon as I arrived there, I felt lonely and thought I could not travel myself so I booked a flight to go back home. So, it means I totally chickened out and I could not forget this experience until now. So now, I am in a perfect circumstance to travel for a long time myself and ready for make it right this time.

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I reunited with a friend, whom I met in South Korea, here in England. She has been traveling the world for more than a year and her story inspires me a lot. Our background is very different, but we had really great time together, so I am so happy to have met her in Korea. I was not sure where to go and what to do now, but thanks to her, now I know clearly that I want to see other countries as manyas many other countries as I can. I wanted to stay in the UK just because I have visa and I spent lots of effort, money and time for it, but it is not worth it to stay here just because of it. In 2011, when I went to the Philippines, I was planning to travel around south east Asia after finishing the school, but as soon as I arrived there, I felt lonely and thought I could not travel by myself, so I booked a flight to go back home. So, it means I totally chickened out and I could not forget this experience until now. So now, I am in a perfect circumstance to travel for a long time by myself and ready for make it right this time.

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