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Good morning! #1 Good morning, guys! I've decided to entry notebooks more often then in order to improve my English skills, but contents deepen on my mood that day. I'm gonna clean my room up, having gotten scolded by my mother. Actually, it's quite hassle. However, my room is being really messy, so then I definitely had better clean my room up. After that, I'll have lunch! Yesterday I had Udon for lunch, so I hope I'll have Gyudon. haha What do you guys eat for breakfast, lunch or dinner ? If you are okay, please correct my English or comment.

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>>Irene Hong Thanks for commenting! It's very good ( ´◡͐︎`) >>Marcelo R. Martins Thanks for your comment! I'm good! You should eat them if you have any chances! They're my favorite dishes! >>Suh Thanks for commenting! The dishes that you had last night are my favorite dishes:)
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Living in Australia means that finding good and affordable Japanese food is not easy, so I have learned to prepare many Japanese dishes. Last night I made "Takoyaki" and "Oyako-don" :D
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Good morning! #1

Good morning, guys!

I've decided to make notebook entries more often then in order to improve my English skills, even if the day's events put me in a bad mood. ( I wasn't exactly sure what you meant here, but I *think* I've given you a suggestion that matches your intended meaning)


I'm gonna clean my room up, having gotten scolded by my mother. Actually, it's quite a hassle. However, my room is being really messy, so then I definitely had better clean my room up. After that, I'll have lunch! Yesterday I had udon for lunch, so I hope I'll have gyudon. haha What do you guys eat for breakfast, lunch, or dinner ?

If you don't mind, please correct my English, or  leave a comment.


Hi, Riku! This wasn't bad at all. I can really feel your personality in your writing. The corrections I made were to make your writing sound a little more "native," so to speak. Good work.


*As for me, I'll probably just have ramen from Family Mart for lunch today =\


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Hello, how are you? I don't know what is udon neither Gyudon. For lunch I have rice, beans, salads of lettuce, tomato, onion, zucchini, carrot, meat and chicken.
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I had an egg tart this morning.

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