My best friend
My best friend is a girl her name is Monique, she's from São Paulo, we're friends makes 7 years. She is tall, not much skinny, curvy hair, she want be psychologist. She is 17 years old. She is a good listener, but sometimes is very aggressive, she had a brother and sometimes is very hard take care of him. I haven't brothers or sisters so normally I haven't idea how take care of a child. It's her last year in high school.
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My best friend
My best friend is a girl named Monique. She's from São Paulo, we're and we´ve been friends makes for 7 years. She is tall, not much too skinny, curvy she has curly/wavy hair, and she wants to be a psychologist. She is 17 years old. She is a good listener, but sometimes is very aggressive. She had(has?) a brother and sometimes it is very hard to take care of him. I haven't any brothers or sisters so normally I haven't any idea how to take care of a child. It's her last year in high school.__________________________________
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My best friend
My best friend is a girl and her name is Monique, she's from São Paulo, we have been friends for 7 years. She is tall, not so skinny, curly hair and she wants be psychologist. She is 17 years old. She is a good listener, but sometimes she is very aggressive, she has a brother and sometimes is very hard take care of him. I do not have brothers or sisters so I do not know how to take care of a child. It's her last year in high school.Want to progress faster?
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