Soon is my birthday When the date is close, always I think about my age and all things that I need to do before to become to a old man. But principally I think about my future and how will I get to m

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Rafael Isaí

Soon is my birthday When the date is close, always I think about my age and all things that I need to do before to become to a old man. But principally I think about my future and how will I get to money for living. Generally I like to get a year more but I don't like to think in the new number what describe my live experience. I am working in my new experience, learn new language and know new places around the world, it is only necessary have a good actitud and much motivation for learning something new.

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Soon is my birthday

When the date is close, always I think about my age and all things that I need to do before to become to a old man. But principally I think about my future and how will I get to money for living. Generally I like to get a year more but I don't like to think in the new number what describe my live experience.

I am working in my new experience, learn new language and know new places around the world, it is only necessary have a good actitud attitude and much motivation for learning something new.

Soon is my birthday Soon it will be my birthday/ my birthday is coming up (la primera opción funciona aunque suena formal - la segunda es más suave)

When the date is close, always I I always think about my age and all things that I need to do before to I become to a becoming an old man. But principally I think about my future and how will I get to money for living I will make a living (tu frase tiene sentido, pero "to make a living" es la expresión más común). Generally I like to get a year more (entiendo lo que dices, pero suena mejor "Generally I like to get another year") but I don't like to think in the new number what describe my live experience. (este parte me confundo. Se diría "but I don't like to be defined by my age" o "but I don't want a number to define my life." ¿Me puedes explicar que quieres decir?)

I am working in my on new experiences, learning a new language and getting to know ("to get to know" es un una buena forma de "conocer") new places around the world. It is only necessary have a good actitud attitude and much motivation for learning something new.

Rafael, your English is very good - better than my Spanish, I'm sure ;). Except for the sentence that begins "Generally I like..." I understood you perfectly, but I made some suggestions that make it sound better to a native speaker. Don't hesitate to ask me if you have any more questions about this. Take care.

Rafael, tu ingles es bueno. Estoy seguro que es mejor que mi español ;). Aparte de la oración que empieza "Generally I like..." te entendí perfectamente, pero ha sugerido unos pocos cambios que suena mejor a un hablante nativo. No dudes en hacerme cualquier pregunta adicional. Cuídate.

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