Heon Ryung님 안녕하세요!

글 정말 잘 쓰셨어요! 도움이 되었음 좋겠다는 마음으로 틀린 부분 고쳐드리고 설명도 최대한 자세하게 해드릴게요^^

Hi everyone i wanna communicate you with with you in english

설명:

1. "i wanna communicate you with english"
--> I wanna communicate with you in English.

한국말로 '그쪽이랑'/ '그쪽과'/'그쪽하고'같은 경우네는 그 '랑/이랑, 와/과, 하고'부분이 늘 사람 호칭 뒤에 나와요~!
예를 들어서,
I want to eat lunch with you (너와 함께)
I want to eat lunch with him (그와 함께)
I want to eat lunch with her (그녀와 함께)
'with + 호칭'입니다.

그리고 '영어로 소통하고 싶다'에서 '영어로'말인데요
영어에서는 '한국어로', '영어로', '이탈리아어로' 등등 그런 '로'를 'in'으로 표현합니다!
예를 들어서,
I am writing a sentence in English.
I am not fluent in Korean, but I am working hard.
I want to speak to her in Italian.
'in + 언어'입니다.

2. "but if let we study together,"
이런 문장을 표현할 수 있는 방법이 2개 있습니다!
--> but if we study together (근데 우리가 같이 공부하면)
--> but if you let us study (근데 같이 공부할 수 있게 해주시면)

보이다시피 'let'이라는 단어는 약간 '__게 해준다'와 비슷한 뜻이에요
예를 들어서,
Will your dad let you go to the party? (너의 아빠가 너 파티 갈 수 있게 해주실거야?)
Who let the dog come inside?? (누가 강아지 집안에 들어올 수 있게 해줬어??)
'let + 허락받는/받고싶은 사람'입니다.

3. "more faster"
--> faster
--> more fast

이건 원어민들도 가끔 틀리는 것인데요 사실 'more + 형용사er'이라고 하면 안되거든요
그냥 'more + 형용사'라고 하시면 돼요~

부담갖지마시고 또 헷갈린거 있으시면 편하게 물어보요!
앞으로도 영어 배우시는걸 응원할게요 끝까지 열심히 하세요!! 화이팅!

Hi everyone

I wanna communicate with you in English

I wanna speak English with you.
Learning English is very hard but if let we study together, we can reach our goal faster.
So I'm looking forward to getting in contact with anyone anywhere who really wants to study hard.
I'm not fluent but I'm really interested in English haha
anyway~~ contact me !_!

Hello!

Good job

The beginning of a sentence always starts with a capital letter. 

I also wouldn't use "wanna" when speaking with people you don't know well and since you are still learning, it may be confusing.

Hi everyone i wanna communicate you with english

Hi everyone, I want to communicate in English

I want to speak English to you.  Learning English is very hard, but if we study together, we can reach our goal faster. So, I am looking forward to hearing from anyone who  wants to study English seriously.  I am not a fluent speaker, but I am really interested in learning to speak English.  Anyway, please contact me.