If I had an entire month to do whatever I would like to do
If I had a month to do whatever I would like to do, the first thing would be sports, some exercises, going to a gym, or like yoga or horse riding. the second thing would be taking drawing lessons because it was my dream to learn to draw, I haven't had time and opportunity to learn to draw. And the third thing would be freelancing to practice my skills ad get some working experience.
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If I had an entire month to do whatever I want
If I had a month to do whatever I want, the first thing would be sports or some exercise, like going to gym, yoga or horse riding. The second thing would be to take drawing lessons because it is my dream to learn to draw but I haven't had time or the opportunity. And the third thing would be to do freelancing so I can practice my skills and get some work experience.Hello!
Good job!
What you said in the first sentence was correct but I changed to "want" to shorten the sentence. It means the same thing.
, - used instead of the words "and" and "or", when there are more than 2 words you are joining.
I changed "was" to "is" because it sounds like it is still a dream (present tense), not in the past.
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If I had an entire month to do whatever I would like to do
If I had a month to do whatever I would like to do, the first thing would be sports, some exercises, going to a gym, or like yoga or horse riding. The second thing, would be taking drawing lessons because it was is my dream to learn to draw, I haven't had time and or the opportunity to (learn to draw). And the third thing, would be freelancing to practise my skills and get some working experience.Nice job!
A few notes: (I'm British by the way, so my corrections follow standard UK English)
We can use 'exercise' [verb] speaking generally: "I need to exercise." [verb] "I need to do some exercise" [noun]
We can use 'exercise' [noun] for a specific set of exercises: "I need to try some different[adj] exercises[n], these are too hard." "I need to try a different[adj] exercise[n]."
We can use 'exercise' meaning 'use' in formal writing: "We need to exercise(use) extreme caution."
'like' is used here as hesitation word, unfortunately isn't suitable for written English, only oral English.
work experience [compound noun] NOT 'working experience' unless you meant "I needing working knowledge"
practise (verb) practice (noun) in UK English. *notice the spelling. In the US it is just 'practice' for both
It was my dream. = it is no longer a dream of yours
It is my dream. = you still dream of being able to draw
Hope this helps. Keep up the good work! :)
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