Please correct this entry I'm looking now on very beatiful picture which I bought in the France. It's picture of Monmatre, the famos area of artists in the iddle of Paris. On this picture you can see

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Please correct this entry I'm looking now on very beatiful picture which I bought in the France. It's picture of Monmatre, the famos area of artists in the iddle of Paris. On this picture you can see a very rainy day, corner of the beatiiful street, houses with two or three storeys, pavement floating with water. Little lantern near the mailbox, small bakery on the and people which are boogie down to somewhere.

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I'm looking now on at a very beautiful picture which I bought in the France. It's a picture of Montmartre, the famous area of artists in the middle of Paris. On In this picture you can see a very rainy day, the corner of the a beautiful street, houses with two or three storeys, and a pavement floating covered/soaked/flooded with water. There is also a little lantern near the a mailbox, a small bakery on the (missing word?Perhaps: corner, side, edge etc) and people which are going to boogie down to somewhere.

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Hi Ira, thanks for contributing this entry. I have made some changes and additions in green, and I also include a revision below for you to view and see if you like it:

I'm looking at a beautiful picture which I bought in France. It's a picture of Montmartre, the famous artistic quarter in the middle of Paris. This picture shows a very rainy day. You can see the corner of a beautiful street made of houses of two or three storeys, and a pavement soaked with water. There is also a little lantern near a mailbox and a small bakery. There are people in the painting, too, who may be on their way to party somewhere.

I hope you find these changes useful. Let me know if you have any questions, and good luck with your English!

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