Do I sound expressing my thought directly?
I heard she was muttering to herself for a second. She said, "Is there anything fun to do around me?" It seemed she wasn't dejected, so I didn't ask her the reason why she said that and I didn't tell her what I thought, though later I wondered if I should have said one of those feelings in the moment. Don't look into your happiness in the future. Happiness isn't about finding it and the most important thing is to fulfill your life. Being happy is all that matters.
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Do I sound (like I am )expressing my thought directly? -> Yes, it sounds like you are directly writing a stream of thoughts!
I heard she was her muttering to herself for a second. She said, "Is there anything fun to do around me?" It seemed she wasn't dejected, so I didn't ask her the reason why she said that and I didn't tell her what I thought. Though later, I wondered if I should have said one of those feelings in the moment. Don't look into(for) your happiness in the future. Happiness isn't just about finding it and the most important thing is to fulfill your life. Being happy is all that matters.These are beautiful thoughts!
I changed some grammatical errors and shortened the long sentence so it would flow a bit more.
I changed "Into your happiness" to for because into suggests you are actively going into the future or you can already see it. You use for if you are searching for something :)
I added the just because I thought it would strengthen your point more!
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