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Inferno Last week, I finally finished the book I was reading. It is a book called "Inferno" by Dan Brown. Maybe, everybody here just reads the book or watched the movie recently released, but I would like to give you my review. I read all the Dan Brown's books (Da Vinci Code, Angels & Demons, Deception Point, Digital Fortress and now Inferno). In my opinion, Da Vinci Code and Angels & Demons are better than the others. In fact, I didn't like Digital Fortress and Deception Point, but it is a personal feeling because I know there are people that loved it. Inferno have Robert Langdon as the main character. For those people who don't know, Robert Langdon is Dan Brown's Indiana Jones. Now, Robert Langdon woke up in a hospital with a bullet wound in her head. He can't remember anything, he is suffering a kind of amnesia. As always, he has to solve puzzles linked with masterpiece Divine Comedy by Dante Alighieri. It is a really good book, but there's one thing that bothers me: Robert Langdon is like a superhero, more than ever he is so powerful and so clever. All humanity depends on his knowledge. There is no one but Robert Langdon can save the world, you know? I know this is only a fictional book, but this characteristic is bigger than other books. As I said before, it is a great book. If you liked other books by the author, I think you will like this one.

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Inferno

Last week, I finally finished the book I was reading. It is was a book called "Inferno" by Dan Brown. Maybe everybody here just reads has just read the book or watched the recently released movie recently released , but I would like to give you my review.

I have read all the of Dan Brown's books (Da Vinci Code, Angels & Demons, Deception Point, Digital Fortress and now Inferno). In my opinion, Da Vinci Code and Angels & Demons are better than the others. In fact, I didn't like Digital Fortress and Deception Point, but it is a personal feeling (or you can use 'opinion') because I know there are people that loved it. (excellent passage)

Inferno have has Robert Langdon as the main character (consider: The main character of Inferno is Robert Langdon). For those people who don't know, Robert Langdon is Dan Brown's Indiana Jones. Now, Robert Langdon woke up in a hospital with a bullet wound in her his head. He can't remember anything, as he is suffering from a kind of amnesia. As always, he has to solve puzzles linked with a masterpiece, this time the Divine Comedy by Dante Alighieri.

It is a really good book, but there's one thing that bothers me: Robert Langdon is like a superhero, and more than ever he is so powerful and so clever. All humanity depends on his knowledge. There is no one but Robert Langdon can save the world, you know? I know this is only a fictional book, but this characteristic character is bigger than other books. (Another excellent passage)

As I said before, it is a great book. If you liked the other books by the author, I think you will like this one.

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Hi Leandro. This is excellent writing; a well-structured essay that is genuinely enjoyable to read. I have made some small changes, mostly to do with the choice of past tenses and verb agreements, for you to consider. I hope you find this amendment useful; feel free to let me know if you have any questions or comments.

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