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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
tell him which team won
describe the conditions on the day
say how you felt about the match
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Hiya mate, How is your leg going? haha You missed another amazing game, which means we won.
The weather was just perfect for me. you know I am crazy for cool weather and pretty vulnerable for hot weather.
It was rainning almost all the game and literally pouring from the sky. It made me run like a puppy on a snow field.
But our other puny mates was not that happy with the weather. they said it felt like playing in the water and too cold.
But here is the most exiting part, everyone in our opponent team felt exactly same with our mates about the weather.
so the result? I scored 2 goals. that is the best record for my entire life.
I just wish that you were with me on the oval. It could have been my happiest moment.
I know it will be only a month in the hospital but way too long for me.
Looking forward to see you again.
Your friend.
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