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Choir is My Life I was growing in a family that always love to sing. My parents are in a choir when they were young. And I think, I get the same hobby like them. For the first time, when I was in the kindergarten I always love to sing along the way to school or anywhere. I can't stop singing along the way. But there was a problem with me. I'm too shy to face the new people around me. I can't singing even talking in front of so many people. So, my parents were looking for something that can make me brave to show myself in front of the people around me. And finally, when I was in elementary school they found me a choir in church and made me join the choir. That is Ascensio Children and Youth Choir. This was a place where I can learn how to be brave to the new people, how to sing as a choir, how to sing the classical song, read the numerical notation, dynamics, harmony, and the important is I can feel the experience to serve our church through singing. And I'm still the part of this group until now. And time flies so fast. Now, I have joined 3 choirs. Ascensio Choir, Anima Christi Choir, and Salve Regina Choir. I'm not shy anymore. I can talk with the new people and even singing in front of them. I have practice with the choirs 3 times a week. Sunday for Ascensio, Tuesday for Anima Christi, and Saturday for Salve Regina. It's all non commercial choir. We often sing for the sunday mass, wedding mass, or another celebration in our church for free. When somebody asked for our help, we will not ask for the payment. In our lives as a choir, we have an opinion that we got the knowledge about music for free so we have to give back of it for free as well. And I'm proud to be part of these choir. Although I didn't get anything. I'm happy to dedicate my time to serve others, especially God with what I have.

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Choir is My Life

I grew up in a family that always loved to sing. My parents were in a choir when they were young. And I think I got the same hobby as them. From the earliest time, when I was in the kindergarten I always loved to sing on my way to school or somewhere else. I could not stop singing along the way. But there was a problem. I am too shy when facing new people. I can't sing or even talk in front of so many people. So, my parents were looking for something that could encourage me to show myself in front of the crowd. 

And finally, when I was in elementary school they found me a church choir and made me join it. That is the Ascensio Children and Youth Choir. This was where I could learn how to be brave in front of new people, how to sing in a choir, how to sing the classical songs, read the numerical notation, dynamics, harmony, and importantly where I could feel the experience of serving our church through singing. And I'm still a part of this choir today. 

And time flies so fast. Now, I have joined 3 choirs. Ascensio Choir, Anima Christi Choir, and Salve Regina Choir. I'm not shy any more. I can talk with new people and even sing in front of them. I have practice with the choirs 3 times a week. Sunday for Ascensio, Tuesday for Anima Christi, and Saturday for Salve Regina. They are all amateur choirs. We often sing for the Sunday mass, at weddings, or on another celebrations in our church for free. When somebody asks for our help, we will not ask for payment. In our lives as a choir, we believe that we learnt about music for free so we have to give back of it for free as well. And I'm proud to be part of these choirs. Although I didn't get anything, I'm happy to dedicate my time to serve others, especially God with what I have.

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