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The Miss Universe in Philippines The beauty pageant called Miss Universe was held here in my beloved country. And I'm so proud of it. Because we have shown to the candidates from all over the world the beauty of our country. Awhile ago, I woke up early to wait for the live coverage of the Miss Universe from Mall Of Asia Arena on TV. I was so glad and excited as our representative, Miss Philippines part of the top 12 out of 85 candidates from around the world. We all also cheers when she was in the top 9 and top 6. But she wasn't able to made it until to last top 3. And I was disappointed with that. Well, top 6 isn't bad at all. But it's okay. Pia Wurtzbach reigns the Miss Universe 2016 which is Miss Philippines candidate, so it's good to give the crown to new Miss Universe which is Miss France. Even though, we lose from the pageant, we're still happy for the having those visitors from around the world in our country to watch and cheers for their representatives because we have shown from all over the world the beauty of our country.

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The Miss Universe in Philippines

The beauty pageant, Miss Universe, was held here in my beloved country. And I'm so proud of it because we have shown to the candidates from all over the world the beauty of our country.

A while ago, I woke up early to wait for the live coverage of the Miss Universe from the Mall of Asia Arena on TV. I was so glad and excited as our representative, Miss Philippines was part of the top 12 out of 85 candidates from around the world. We all cheered when she was in the top 9 and top 6. But she wasn't able to made it to the final 3. And I was disappointed with that. Well, top 6 isn't bad at all. But it's okay. Pia Wurtzbach reigns as Miss Universe 2016 who is the Miss Philippines candidate, so it's good to give the crown to the new Miss Universe which is Miss France.

Even though we lost the pageant, we're still happy for having those visitors from around the world in our country to watch and cheering for their representatives because we have shown people all over the world the beauty of our country.

Very well written!

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The Miss Universe in the Philippines

The beauty pageant called Miss Universe was held here in my beloved country, and I'm so proud of it, because  we have shown to the candidates from all over the world the beauty of our country.

Awhile ago, I woke up early to wait for the live coverage of the Miss Universe Competition from the Mall Of Asia Arena on TV. I was so glad and excited as our representative, Miss Philippines, was one of the top 12 out of 85 candidates from around the world. We all also cheered when she was in the top 9 and top 6. However, she wasn't able to make it until to last the top 3, and I was disappointed with that. Well, the top 6 isn't bad at all. But It's okay. Pia Wurtzbach, who is the Phillippines' candidate, reigns as Miss Universe 2016 which is Miss Philippines candidate, so it's good to give the crown to the new Miss Universe, which is Miss France.

Even though we lost from the pageant, we're still happy about having those visitors from around the world in our country to watch and cheer for their representatives, because we have shown people from all over the world the beauty of our country.
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Haha. Yeah. Thank you and I'm proud of it. :)
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hey, I watched the show this morning. congratulations to your country for the succesfull event and to your candidate, Maxine that made it to top 6! :D

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