yesterday night someone was call police saying……
Yesterday at the midnight，I was accpet an oder：a guy said he heard baby cry very loudly beside the door of the hotel，but when our policeman had come，they can't find that baby… and that voice just from two cats ，because they were fighting …
when I knew ahout reason，I have no comment about this thing…
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Last night someone call the police and said……
At midnight, I was accepting an order and the guy said he heard a baby crying beside the door of the hotel. When the police officers came, they couldn't find the baby. I found out that it was not a baby, but two cats making noise. I have nothing else to say about this.0
Last night someone called the police saying……
Last night, at midnight, I was accepting an order when a guy said he heard a baby crying very loudly by the door of the hotel. When the policemen came，they can't find the baby… and said that the voices were just two cats fighting…When I found out the reason, I had nothing to comment about it.
Hello!
I ended some sentences because your paragraph was very long.
When taking about the previous night, say "Last night". When taking about the day time, say "Yesterday".
if more than 1 policeman, use plural "policemen".
if getting new information, use "find" or "found" - present and past tenses.
if it's something that you already knew, use "know" or "knew" - present and past tenses.
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Yes ，that’s true·····
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really?
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