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Are there any mistakes? I really liked the movie that I saw yesterday at the cinema. The only thing that was not really pleasant was my place in the cinema. Indeed I entered in the room just a few minutes before the begining of the movie and almost all the seats were already occupied. So I was very close to the screen and rather on the side.

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Are there any mistakes?

I really liked the movie that I saw yesterday at the cinema, the only thing that was not really pleasant was my place in the cinema. Indeed I entered in the room just a few minutes before the beginning of the movie and almost all the seats were already occupied, So I was very close to the screen and rather on the side.


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Are there any mistakes?

I really liked the movie (that) I saw yesterday at the cinema.
The only thing that was not really pleasant about the whole experience was the my place where my seat was situated in the theatre. Indeed   The fact was when I entered into the movie theatre just a few minutes before the begining of the movie, I found out that and almost all the seats were already occupied. So, I had to seat was very close to the screen and not somewhere farther back, where I would rather be seated.
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i think it's better you wrote that ''entered the room '' in the second sentence

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