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Nepal flagsrijana
your correction of my sentences will help me a lot on language improvemet Its a conversation between me and my friend who messaged me after so long time a part. Saroj: Hello Sri. how do you do? Me: oh hi. I am good. what have you been upto? Saroj: I am also good. well I was quite concerned about my exams so I was lost and its almost done now. Me: oh that's good. hope you did it well. so how you come to message me after a long time apart? or/ what makes you message me? Saroj: well, I wanted to say happy nurse day. :) and this is your day Me: awww thank you so much. No one have wished me till now for this day expect you. I am so glad you wished it. Saroj: hahah. so how much glad are you now? Me; hehe. what sort of question is this ? I cant explain my emotions Saroj: Its a simple question Me: honestly I got something which I was not expecting. I thought we would never talk again Saroj: what made you think so?. do i did something wrong? I forget everything Me: I could have shown you our last messages but unfortunately I deleted Saroj: ok forget about it past is almost gone Me: so how is your study going on? Saroj: I have completed my internship and I am in search of job. and tell me how your are passing your days? Me: well I stay watching TV, surfing the internet and reading novel. that"s it. Saroj: Ok sri I have to go now. I have some work stuff to complete. Bye catch you later Me: ok bye

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your correction of my sentences will help me a lot on language improvemet

It's a conversation between me and my friend who messaged me after such a long time apart.

Saroj: Hello Sri. how do you do?
Me: oh hi. I am good. What have you been up to?
Saroj: I am also good. Well, I was quite concerned about my exams so I was lost* but it's almost done now.
Me: oh that's good. I hope you did them (=exams) well. So how did you come to message me after this long time apart? or/(also good English) what makes you message me?
Saroj: well, I wanted to say happy nurse's day**. :) and this is your day
Me: awww thank you so much. No one has wished me that till now, except you. I am so glad you wished it!
Saroj: hahah. so how many glads are you now?
Me; hehe. what sort of a question is this ? I can't explain my emotions
Saroj: It's a simple question
Me: honestly, I got something which I was not expecting. I thought we would never talk again
Saroj: what made you think so?. Did I do something wrong? I forget everything
Me: I could have shown you our last messages but unfortunately I deleted them.
Saroj: ok forget about it. The past is almost gone
Me: so how is your study going?
Saroj: I have completed my internship and I am in search of job. And tell me, how are you passing your days?
Me: well I still watch TV, surf the internet and read novels. That"s it.
Saroj: Ok, Sri I have to go now. I have some work-stuff to complete. Bye, catch you later!
Me: ok bye!

*or .. so I was sad but ...

**the nurses' special day of the year? 23 June, say?

Very well written!

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