IELTS writing task 1
Question:
You have a friend who lives in a city abroad.
You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city.
Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.
My Answer:
Dear David,
I hope everything is going well with you and thank you very much for the photographs you sent me. I am impressed with the beautiful landscape in your city.
I have been thinking for quite sometime to follow a course in Nano-technology. After seeing the beauty of your city I decided to do it in one of the colleges in your city.
I graduated from Faculty of Science, University of Peradeniya and my major subject was Chemistry. Currently I am working as a chemist in a Paint production company where I have been involving in researches for last 2 years to improve the quality of pain using nano-technology. So, I want to improve my knowledge in nano-chemistry.
I would be grateful to you, if you can help me to find a suitable course in one of the colleges in your city. As you told me once that you had connection with few professors in some colleges, it will not be difficult for you to find details about the courses for me.
I look forward to hearing from you soon
Many thanks,
\Jeewan
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IELTS writing task 1
Question:You have a friend who lives in a city abroad.
You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city.
Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.
My Answer:
Dear David,
I hope everything is going well with you and thank you very much for the photographs you sent me. I am impressed with the beautiful landscape in your city.
I have been thinking for quite sometime some time to follow a course in nNano-technology. After seeing the beauty of your city, I have decided to do it in one of the colleges in your city.
I graduated from Faculty of Science, University of Peradeniya and my major subject was Chemistry. Currently, I am working as a chemist in a pPaint production company where, for the last 2 years, I have been involveding in researches for last 2 years to improve the quality of pain using nano-technology. So, I want to improve my knowledge of in nano-chemistry.
I would be grateful to you, if you can could help me to find a suitable course in one of the colleges in your city.
(As you told me once that you had connections with a few professors in some colleges, it will not be difficult for you to find out details about the courses for me.-> this sentence, apart from containing some errors, does not correspond with the task you are being asked to do: ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution. IMHO, you need to rewrite it to reflect the task
I look forward to hearing from you soon
Many thanks,
\Jeewan
I hope this helps
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