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Almost a wholy sunny day Here in my city, Botucatu, Brazil, usually it rains every january's days, and often, all day long. Today, it was different, well, not quite different. I waked up at 9, and I could see through the window the brightness of a new marvelous day. I've taken my breakfast and started cleaning my houve. After that, I went to my yard and collected a lettuce for a lunch. So, I decided to cut the grass of my yard. It took me 2 hours under a hot sun. I had my lunch at 3 and went to play soccer at 5. Sundelly, the weather has changed at all and got rainned very heavy, a lot of thunders and lightnings. It was very scared but it is normal for a tropical Country. Finally, I had dinner in my parent's house and now I'm home with my wife, that is rigth now snoring by my side. At the end, the day started such as a sunny day and birds singing outside and it has been finished raining and my wife "singing"... Let's try to sleep.... I'd be greatful if anyone corrected this to me.

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Thanks Nick and Bluebottle for your help and patience and it was nice because you sent me two different answers .
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Almost a whole sunny day

Here in my city, Botucatu, Brazil, usually it rains every january's days, and often, all day long it usually rains all day long in January. Today, it was different, well, not quite different. I waked woke up at 9, and I could see through the window the brightness of a new marvelous day through the window

I've taken eaten my breakfast and started cleaning my houve house. After that, I went into my yard and collected a head of lettuce for a lunch. So, Instead I decided to cut the grass of my yard. It took me 2 hours under a the hot sun.

I had ate my lunch at 3 and went to play soccer at 5. Sundelly suddenly, the weather has changed at all and got rainned it rained very heavily,with a lot of thunders and lightnings. It was very scared scary but it is normal for a tropical Ccountry.

Finally, I had dinner in at my parent's house and now I'm at home with my wife, that is rigth now who is snoring by my side.

At the end
 overall, the day started as such as a sunny day and with birds singing outside.  It has been finished raining and with my wife "singing."

Let's try to sleep....

I'd be greatful grateful if anyone corrected this to for me.


*Awesome job, a few mistakes but I could understand everything you wrote :)


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Almost a wholly sunny day

Here in my city, Botucatu, Brazil, it usually rains every January day, and often all day long. Today, it was different, well, not quite different. I woke up at 9, and I could see through the window a bright new marvelous day.

I took breakfast and started cleaning my house. After that, I went to my yard and collected a lettuce for lunch. So, I decided to cut the grass in the yard. It took me 2 hours under a hot sun.

I had my lunch at 3 and went to play football at 5. Suddenly, the weather changed and it rained very heavily, with a lot of thunder and lightning. It was very scared but it is normal for a tropical country.

Finally, I had dinner in my parent's house and now I'm home with my wife, who is right now snoring by my side.

In the end, the day started so sunny with birds singing outside and it ended raining with my wife "singing"...

Let's try to sleep....

I'd be grateful if anyone corrected for me.

Very well written!

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