My first poetry in English.
Please, correct the faults, thank's :)
There is a long time ago,
that I didn't have seen a swallow,
I write about love,
and not about the book ''A man called Ove'',
I don't know if I'm good to poetry,
like I see which become the tree,
I write because it's good,
I think that it's good for the mood.
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My first poetry in English.
Please, correct the faults, thank's :)There is It's been a long time ago,
that I didn't since I have seen a swallow,
I write about love,
and not about the book ''A man called Ove'',
I don't know if I'm good at to poetry,
like I see which become the tree, ??
I write because it's good,
I think that it's good for my/one's the mood.
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Thanks Ross ;)
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Great job! Really enjoyed reading it :-)
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My first poetry in English.
Please, correct the faults, thank's :)It's a long time,
that I haven't seen a swallow,
I write about love,
and not about the book ''A man called Ove'',
I don't know if I'm good at poetry,
like I see which ["as I see what" ?] becomes of the tree,
I write because it's good,
I think that it's good for the mood.
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Thank you for your comment Bluebottle, it's make me pleasure ;) I give the authorisation to correct my poetry if there is some faults. :)
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