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my plan of spring vacation. hello. my name is Chiho. i'm in hard week for my university's test. however, after finish all my test, i'm in spring vacation!! first, i will go to strawberry fair in Osaka with my friend. in there, i have very huge sweets of strawberry. next, i will go to Tokyo Disney Resort in February. in February, japanese travel cost is cheaper than March, so we decided to go in February. finally, i will go to Bangkok just me alone!!!!!!! this is my biggest event not in my spring vacation but in my life!! i only go to abroad with my family or friend. so i am so nerves. but it is a thing one of my dream, so i am happy too. this is my plan of spring vacation. please correct my note(^^)

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my plan of spring vacation.

Hello.
My name is Chiho.
i'm*1 in hard week for my university's test. - this is a tough week for me at university as we have lots of tests
however, after finish all my test, i'm in spring vacation!!

First, i will go to strawberry fair in Osaka with my friend. in there, i will eat lots of sweet strawberries*2.


Next, i will go to Tokyo Disney Resort in February. In February, it is cheaper to travel around Japan than March, so we decided to go in February.

finally, i will go to Bangkok by myself! This is my biggest trip of my life!!
i have only been abroad with my family or friends. so i am so nerves, but this is one of my dreams, so i am happy too do it.

this is my plan for spring vacation.

please correct my note(^^)


*1 Capital letters must be used with nouns and at the start of a sentence.

*2 list of plurals https://www.theenglishspace.com/grammar/nouns/irregular-plural-list.html

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my plan of spring vacation.

hello.
my name is Chiho.
i'm in a hard week for my university's testing. OR (This is a hard week for me due to university testing)
however, after I finish all my tests, i'm in spring vacation!!

first, i will go to the strawberry fair in Osaka with my friend. in there, i will have very huge sweets of strawberry. or (...made of strawberry)

next, i will go to the Tokyo Disney Resort in February. in February, japanese travel cost is cheaper than in March, so we decided to go in February.

finally, i will go to Bangkok. just me alone!!!!!!! this is my biggest event. not in for my spring vacation, but in my life!!
i only go to abroad with my family or friends. so, i am so nerves nervous, but it is a thing one of my dreams, or (it is one of my dreams) so i am happy too.

this is my plan of for spring vacation.

please correct my note(^^)


I have made corrections and little side notes that may make it sound better. This was very understandable. Very good job. Just work on capitalization (which was the main issue with this) and you will improve greatly. Let me know if this helps and feel free to ask me for help anytime. Peace.

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