Should stores stop providing plastic shopping bag? Stare your opinion clearly and give reasons
I think stores stop providing plastic shopping bag because it is bad system for environment and stores. There are two reasons.
First, it is bad for environment because some people throw away plastic bag on the road. If stores stop providing plastic bag, those people will decrease. Second, it is good for store's finance. If stores stop providing plastic shopping bag, stores will become not need to cost on stocking plastic bags. Then, stores can cost on other things, for example, more increase the kind of goods or improve stores service.
Of course, some people say plastic bag is convenient, but I believe that stop providing plastic bag will bring a good effect on environment and stores. In conclusion, I think stores should stop providing plastic shopping bag for protecting environment and increasing store's service.
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Should stores stop providing plastic shopping bags? State your opinion clearly and give reasons.
I think stores should stop providing plastic shopping bags because it is a bad system for the environment and stores. There are two reasons.(More Natural: I think stores should stop proving plastic shopping bags for two reasons. First of all, shopping bags are bad for the environment and second, they are bad for stores).
First, it is bad for environment because some people throw away plastic bags on the road. If stores stop providing plastic bags, those people will decrease.
(More Natural: The reason why shopping bags are bad for the environment is because some people tend to throw them away on the street. If stores were to stop providing plastic bags, I believe this problem will decrease).
Second, it is good for store's finance. If stores stop providing plastic shopping bags, stores will not need to spend money on stocking plastic bags. Then, stores can use that money on other things. For example, to increase certain kinds of goods or to improve the stores customer service.
(More Natural: Not providing shopping bags is also good for the stores finances. If stores stop providing plastic shopping bags, then the money that would be used to re-stock these bags could go towards other important things. For example, the money could be used to increase certain kids of goods or to improve the store's customer service).
Of course, some people believe that plastic bags are convenient, but I believe that not providing plastic bags will have a good effect on environment and stores. In conclusion, I think stores should stop providing plastic shopping bags to protect the environment and increasing the store's service.
(More Natural: Of course, some people still believe in the convenience of plastic bags. However, I believe that not providing plastic bags will have a good effect on the environment and the store's finances. In conclusion, I think stores should stop providing plastic shopping bags to protect the environment and increase the store's customer service).
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