About an outgoing daughter. I

Hello everybody.

The last description I wrote didn't get any corrections, I supposed it was pretty large, so I'll split this description into two separate entries.

Her name is Lina. Ever since she was a little girl her strong personality, inherited from her father, has shone through. As a young woman, she liked parties and hanging around with her friends. Because of her strong character, she was always arguing with her father, Rodrigo. He was so fond of her that he was constantly worried about her well-being.

Lina always loved her family; her shy brother, her calm mother, and even her strict father. When her brother stole money that her father Rodrigo was saving away, she was extremely upset. Much to her surprise though, she understood her brother's actions.

From that day on, she decided to put a stop to her wild lifestyle. She went to college and graduated with good grades in an administration course. Soon she will get married, to a co-worker, whom she met due to the changes in her life.

About an outgoing daughter. I

Hello everybody.

The last description I wrote didn't get any corrections, I supposed it was pretty large, so I'll split this description into two separate entries.

Her name is Lina. Since she was a little girl it was obvious that she had a strong personality -inherited from her father. As a young woman, she liked parties, and hanging around with her friends. Because of her character she was always arguing with her father,  Rodrigo. He was so fond of her that he was constantly worried about her well-being.

Lina always loved her family, her shy brother, her calm mother and even her strict father. When her brother stole Rodrigo's was savings, she was surprised -- and devastated. However,  she ulimately understood why her brother did it. And that realization changed her life. 

From that day on, she walked a new path. She went to college and graduated with honors in Administration. She is engaged to a co-worker and they plan to be married soon.