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visiting a zoo This morning, I felt rather peculiar, so I decided to go to the zoo with my girlfriend. We sat at a public table beside a lake to view the scene at the zoo. I poured a glass of milk for my girlfriend. The weather was very good. It was sunny, cloudy, windy. Every organisms were very lively. The nearest my seat were pelicans swimming satisfactorily, a little bit far were peacocks spreading their tail feathers. Then, we stood up and went for seeing the other animals. I impressed with a ferocious leopard with colorful spots, under its paws was a poor chicken. I heard from a guide that the leopard family was nearly extinct and hundred thousands of items perished in the last 100 years serving Eastern medicines. It was fun to come the site of the monkeys. I threw out a peach to a monkey. He giggled with me. And my girlfriend threw some peanut in him. He's so cute. Then, we came to a porcupine pen. Maybe It was cold, so it didn't go out its cave. We persist to wait its for 10 min, fortunately, we saw it. But it didn't show any respects, it sat back towards us. Then, we arrived at a frozen area, here, we met penguins . The penguins were last guests who we met before finish the tour around the zoo. We came in the Heroes Monument.The monument is a cemetery having thousands of tombs of heroes ,It would have been a permanent feature in the city. We said a prayer before going home.

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visiting a zoo

This morning, I felt rather peculiar, so I decided to go to the zoo with my girlfriend. We sat at a public table beside a lake to view the scene at the zoo. I poured a glass of milk for my girlfriend. The weather was very good. It was sunny, cloudy, windy. Every organisms were very lively. The nearest my seat were pelicans swimming satisfactorily, a little bit far were peacocks spreading their tail feathers.

> This morning, I woke up with a strange urge to do something different. I then decided to visit the zoo with my girlfriend. In the zoo, we sat at a table besides a lake, where we could enjoy the scenery of the place. While we were sitting there, I poured a glass of milk for my girlfriend.

The weather was sunny and windy. Every animals seemed to be very lively. The nearest animal to our seats were some pelicans swimming happily in a pond, with  some peacocks farther away spreading their feathers.

I just have the  time to correct this .

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Visiting a zoo

This morning, I felt rather peculiar, so I decided to go to the zoo with my girlfriend. We sat at a public table beside a lake to view the scene at the zoo. I poured a glass of milk for my girlfriend. The weather was very good. It was sunny, cloudy and windy. Every organisms was very lively. The nearest my seat was pelicans swimming satisfactorily, a little bit far was peacocks spreading their tail feathers. Then, we stood up and went for seeing the other animals. I am impressed with a ferocious leopard with colorful spots, under its paws was a poor chicken. I heard from a guide that the leopard's family was nearly extinct and hundred thousands of items perished in the last 100 years serving Eastern medicines. It was fun to come the site of the monkeys. I threw out a peach to a monkey. He giggled with me. And my girlfriend threw some peanut in him. He's so cute. Then, we came to a porcupine pen. Maybe it was cold, so it didn't go out its cave. We persist to wait its for 10 min, fortunately, we saw it. But it didn't show any respects, it sat back towards us. Then, we arrived at a frozen area, here, we met penguins . The penguins were last guests who we met before finishing  the tour around the zoo.
We came in the Heroes Monument.The monument is a cemetery having thousands of tombs of heroes. It would have been a permanent feature in the city. We said a prayer before going home.

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