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Cheng Yun
Freedom It's hard to defined the word freedom. The most powerful country in the world which started many wars claimed that they were protecting freedom. A group of people in Middle East which plotted a lot of attacks over the world said they want to be free. Everyone has different definition of freedom. In mine, freedom is the right to be wrong, not the right to do wrong.

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Freedom

It's hard to define the word freedom. The most powerful country in the world that started many wars claimed that they were protecting freedom. A group of people in Middle East that plotted a lot of attacks all over the world said they want to be free. Everyone has a different definition of freedom. In mine, freedom is the right to be wrong, not the right to do wrong.

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> I can't explain why the "which" started and "which" plotted feels wrong. Technically, it's okay, but something feels off. Instead of "that", I think you can also use "who" started and "who" plotted. But "that" feels better.

> Everyone has a different definition of freedom. OR Everyone has different definitions of freedom. [I think the first one fits more with what you're trying to say].

> In mine, freedom is... => can also be "For me, freedom is..." or "In my definition, freedom is..." [I kept your original].


Overall, the corrections were just a few grammar points. What matters is that you've expressed your meaning well :). I corrected this because I liked your last sentence a lot.

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Freedom

It's hard to define the word freedom.  The most powerful country in the world, which started many wars claimed that they were protecting freedom. A group of people in Middle East which plotted a lot of attacks over the world, said they want to be free.  

Everyone has different definition of freedom. In mine, freedom is the right to be wrong, not the right to do wrong.

Excellent job!  The only grammatical error I found was "defines".   The rest is just formatting, so that it looks good And reads clearly,

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