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Should we spend money on exploring space? Cambridge writting. Should we spend money on exploring space? Space exploration has become an important field within all powerful countries. At the beginning, the struggle spacial was initiated by the USA and Russia, only for finding out what country was the strongest and which had the best technology. Nowadays, the vast majority of countries or communities have a space program such as NASA, ESA, etc. and they develop together new devices to explore space. Countries spend a lot of money investing in new devices and technologies, without successful in many occasion. Why don't they spend this money in investigations for improving our life on the Earth? Many people think about it, and currently, this thoughts are understable due to many others fields as medicine need investment to find out the cure of serious illness such as AIDS or Cancer. Nonetheless, people have to think about the development in engineering field, and how this advances can improve the others areas, because all fields need to grow together, and the lasts discoveries in the field of medicine can be caused by investments in another areas like engineering. One examples can be lasers, and how the development of theirs during the space race have achieve their uses in optical field. I think that countries should invest in all areas because it's going to do to grow our development technology and will improve our lifestyle. Correct my text,please. Thanks!

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Should we spend money on exploring space?

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Should we spend money on exploring space?

Space exploration has become an important field within all powerful countries. At the beginning, the space-race was initiated by the USA and Russia, basically just to find out what country was the strongest and which had the best technology. Nowadays, the vast majority of countries or communities have a space program such as NASA, ESA, etc., and they develop together new devices to explore space.
Countries spend a lot of money investing in new devices and technologies (without successful on many occasions). Why don't they spend this money instead to improve our lives on Earth? Many people are asking this question, and currently, this point of view is understandable due to many others fields as medicine needing investment to find out the cure of serious illnesses such as AIDS or cancer.
Nonetheless, people have to think about the developments in the field of engineering, and how these advances can improve the others areas, because all fields need to grow together, and the latest discoveries in the field of medicine can be prompted by investments in another areas like engineering. One examples is lasers, and how the development of them during the space race has led to their uses in optics.
I think that countries should invest in all areas because it's going to stimulate the overall development of technology, and it and will improve our lifestyle.

Correct my text,please. Thanks!

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