My weekend with my family This weekend I went with my family to celebrate my father, brother and nephew brithday´s. We went to Cuernavaca and that was good because we could cook bbq and then we swim.

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My weekend with my family This weekend I went with my family to celebrate my father, brother and nephew brithday´s. We went to Cuernavaca and that was good because we could cook bbq and then we swim. The bad of the day was there were many mosquitos, spiders and dragonflies. Previously to come back at home (City), we cut the cake and it was delicious because was made with chocolate and three milks. Anyway, we had a lot of fun day.

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My weekend with my family

This weekend I went with my family to celebrate my father's, brother's and nephew's birthdays. We went to Cuernavaca, and that was good because we could cook bbq, and then we swim afterwards. The bad things that happened that day, was that there were many mosquitoes, spiders and dragonflies.
Previously to come back at home (City), we cut the cake, and it was delicious because it was made with chocolate and three (cups of?) milks.
Anyway, we had a lot of fun that day.

My weekend with my family

This weekend I went with my family to celebrate my father's, brother's and nephew's birthdays. We went to Cuernavaca and that was good because we could barbecue and then swim. The bad thing about the day was there were many mosquitos, spiders and dragonflies.
Later we came back home (in the City), we cut the cake and it was delicious because it was made with chocolate and three milks (?).
Anyway, we had a lot of fun.

Ok, not bad, the only thing I can really help with is

my father's, brother's and nephew's birthdays.

You use the ' to denote possession, so it is "the birthday of my father" or "my father's birthday". Now you wrote birthday's and it needed to be birthdays. Once you get the hang of that you have made a big step.

Now, a big challenge. What to do with twin brothers? They have their birthday on the same day. So it is the "birthday of my brothers" or "my brothers' birthday" with the ' coming after the s.

Have a look on line to get all the rules.

My weekend with my family

This weekend I went with my family to celebrate my father, brother and nephew birthday´s. We went to Cuernavaca and that was good because we could cook bbq and then we swim. The bad thing of the day was there were many mosquitos, spiders and dragonflies.
Previously to come back at home Before came back to home(City), we cut the cake and it was delicious because was made with chocolate and three milks.
Anyway, we had a lot of fun on that day.

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