Guys, please help me with my introduction. I need to improve it somehow.
My name is Yury and I come from Saint-Petersburg, Russia – the biggest country in the world. I graduated from a Russian private school in Saint-Petersburg , which is called “Peterburgskiy Standard”. After graduation I have been living in China for 2 years, which allowed me to gain knowledge of the culture of the country and language. Restaurant industry has always attracted me, and the faculty of Hospitality management is an opportunity for me to obtain enough knowledge and experience about how that business works. In the future, I want to own a restaurant that will be placed in the Netherlands or somewhere in Europe. Thus, I will be able to transfer all my creativity and knowledge that I will receive at the end of my studies in Wittenborg University.
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Guys, please help me with my introduction. I need to improve it somehow.
My name is Yury and I come from Saint Petersburg, Russia - the biggest country in the world. I graduated from a Russian private school in Saint Petersburg , which is called “Peterburgskiy Standard”. After graduation I moved to China, where I have been living for 2 years. It has allowed me to gain knowledge of the country's culture and language. The restaurant industry has always appealed to me, and hospitality management is an opportunity for me to gain enough knowledge and experience about how that industry works. In the future, I want to own a restaurant in the Netherlands or somewhere else in Europe. Thus, I will be able to transfer all my creativity and knowledge that I will have obtained at the end of my studies at Wittenborg University.Want to progress faster?
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